Gautama Vs Endivisual

gautama · #1 08-06-2007, 03:33 PM

10 bars, that's all.

I'll go first with a quickie i just wrote:

You aint no competition, you're like a long summer stop//
Your lyrical skills are so low, it's like you rap down-under, dog//
People must be celibate, they don't give a fuck about yo', girl//
Your career'll last as long as the tour for "Best Of Both Worlds"//
You're asian, you probably think that is so neat//
But must be made in Taiwan, cause your lyrics are so cheap//
No I ain't kidding, i aint the Joker from Batman//
You're so predictable, i can see through you like a CAT-scan//
I'm not the asian one, but i come as sharp as a katana//
You must be taking acting classes cause your lines are all drama//

Laker · #2 08-06-2007, 03:37 PM

Just to say, when Endi drops her verse I'll edit and open up the poll.

Endivisual · #3 08-07-2007, 12:59 PM

you're a real gentleman, you don't know how to make a girl-cry/

my shit was made in china and it sold out worldwide/

don't be talkin about my career cuz i don't see you drop-shit/

i'm easily adapted to beatin wack rappas like yourself like breakin a pair of chopsticks/

i'm korean blooded so you know i can tae-kwon-do/

while you take one doe and make one flow/

so wack that i had to karate chop ya leavin you split like a sundae/

what are you talkin 'bout me being asian for? you're the one drivin the hyundai/

like you said, i guess i'm a hell of an acta cuz i'm standin on the red carpet/

while ya homeless ass is behind a chinese restaurant eatin out the garbage/