Welcome to the October 2008 BigMusicBoard Poetry Contest!

The details: The poem can be as short or as long as you need to express yourself to the other BigMusicBoard members. Try not to let your flow be whack just let go – impress us with your creativity!

As always we’ve got some mad prizes for the winners so be sure to be as creative as you like, the more heartfelt the better!

You can write about anything you like as long as it flows, intrigues us and is 100% authentic.

The contest starts: 9th October 2008
Cut off date for entries: 31st October 2008

Entries are open from now until the end of the month and you can submit multiple entries. The limit is 5 entries per person.

The rules: Keep it clean people and keep the love for your other members - no disrespectin!

You can get your mates to vote for you but don’t be creating fake accounts cos that ain’t cool and will get you ass disqualified quick as!

How To Submit Your Verses: To submit you're entry you just gotta reply to this thread, just hit new reply, paste you're rap in then hit Submit!

First place gets a sleek iPod Touch while the runner up gets the BigMusicBoard goodies

Wishing I could wrap my arms around you
Let us groove as we move across the floor
I want you, I need you more and more
You can show me the door if that what needs be
But we both know that us together is the perfect remedy
Were what the world needs, together we could rule
They say diamonds are a girls best friend, I guess then I'm your perfect jewell
I can't help but say the l word whenever your around, I guess you don't mind
Your so sweet, so beautiful and kind
Me and you could ride the tide of our lifes, we could dance on the waves
Just when I thought my life was over, the gift of life you gave
Your all round essence is so over-powering, you make me faint
You've got me totally hooked, I'm scarred with your taint
I can't imagine my life without anyone but you
You make me feel so good, with you I could never feel blue
I'm wishing for you..wishing on my star.

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All You Gotta Do Is Watch Me
Look What I Can Do With My Feet

seeing you again made me realize how much i missed you
how i longed to feel your lips move
how much i wanted to feel you move your tongue
how you told me you loved me more.. and i'd try to prove you wrong
it doesn't make sense how our love is stronger than ever
when right now, we're not even officially together
you loved me the most
hurt me the most
and i never thought i'd take you back
but here you are, in my arms, sitting on my lap
i missed how you smiled..missed how you laughed
i missed how you held..missed how you grabbed
missed your warmth..your soft touch
not to mention your fine body and the ass i lust
i forgot how much i loved to hold you and kiss you
i guess it's because your last words shot through my heart like a pistol
but it's amazing how the same words healed my heart
lets start over..this time..promise me that we wont fall apart

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RIP Proof

"So i took my dreams and made it some thousands..
Then i took my life and i made it an album"

www.myspace.com/endivisualmuzik
www.soundclick.com/endivisual

nice poems guys

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Peace Prayer

Lord I know why you did it,
but it hurts so bad.
Lord I don't know how to deal with it,
I'm So very sad.
Lord this person that I love,
Is gone in a blink,
Lord show me a way,
Show me how to think.
Lord I know why,
but i don't know how.
Lord show me a way,
to stop crying now.
Lord you showed me how,
to take care of my sisters and brothers,
But i have just one request,
Please take care of my MOTHER!

By: Brandon Kelley
TO: the greatest mom Who has ever lived and the other moms up there in the sky!! WE LOVE YOU!

So laker got his prize

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tony tony touch. Noztra

Not yet, shouldn't be long though.

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All You Gotta Do Is Watch Me
Look What I Can Do With My Feet

Am I crazy for feeling this way about you?
Maybe it's true but I can't help but love what you do
I lust after your every move..I love your sensual groove
It's such a crazy feeling..just how much I love you
Your my scarred burning desire..your my burning fire
I'm sorry if it seems I want this too much
But don't you? You can't lie..I know you feel exactly the same
You love me more than anything..you can't deny that too
You love me..no one can make you feel the way I do
I know there's him..but can you honestly tell me you love him?
I didn't think so..I'm the one who constantly feels your head
I'm the one forced to wear red..he clearly wants me dead
You have to make the choice now..what's it to be
I want to see you smile me glee..it's simple..pick me.

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All You Gotta Do Is Watch Me
Look What I Can Do With My Feet

Your the girl I've been waiting for my whole life
But it's you causing me all this pain and strife
Run my fingers up and down your neck..stone cold
You know exactly what to say to me..without being told
Feel you brush up against me..this is how it should be
Just you and me..you already know you have the key
So go ahead and unlock me, you own my heart
Just promise me you won't take the thing that tears me apart
Explore my soul..find out things you never knew existed
You could never know just how much I've tried to resist this
Let me whisper in your ear, I'll tell you all the things you love to hear
I could defiantly make you change your mind
I'm the only one who can send shivers down your spine
Run my hands down your back..are you telling me another man can make you feel like this?
I didn't think so, it's only I who can make you go weak with just one kiss
As funny as all this may seem..if I got you I'm living the American Dream.

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All You Gotta Do Is Watch Me
Look What I Can Do With My Feet

Keep posting guys as tomorrow is the cut-off!