I got the inspiration from the song 'While My Guitar Gently Weeps', and from a girl named Alicia.

I want as much feedback as possible so let me know what you think please.

My guitar gently weeps for you
Asking myself to play just another one
Just one then I promise to sleep
But on and on it goes, gently weeping for you
Song after song, with no sign of stopping
As I touch each chord and hit every note
Every one struck is just for you
Every beat of it's heart just for you
My guitar gently weeps for you
You are it's master, it's only source of light
It's passion, it's energy, it's heart
You take it's breath, you tap it's strings
You hold it's base, you tune it's strings
It weeps for you, wanting you, feeling you, needing you
As it plays on with no end in sight, with no sign of a fight
Just the temptation to play on and on, no cons
Love is the potion, you the remedy
As my guitar gently weeps for you.

Its a really good poem, you can really see the love and the emotions in it, alot of imagery makes the poem beautiful, you should give it to her, im sure she'll love it.

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Thanks for the feedback, I appreciate it.

She's seen the poem and loves it, so I'm happy :)

nice nice... she must be a special girl if she's your inspiration =)

Thanks Antonia.

She is :)

Any more feedback?

wow, its beautiful!! this is a wonderful poem laker. =)

Thanks Pepper, appreciate it.