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Old 06-18-2007, 01:51 PM
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Hurt...

Well, i wrote this yesterday on something that happened before and the feelings that i still get, uhm yh, enjoy reading, and gimme feedback.

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Its hard to explain how i felt when i found my friend liked him, the world itself fell around me, my pain increasing. The day i knew she liked him was a stab in my heart, something i will never forget.

She said she never liked him, i knew it was a lie, i knew he didnt like her but yet my pain wouldn't say goodbye. Love can hurt. Especially when you know, you truely love this person, and you just can't let them go. Why does life treat me this way? keeping me from the one i love? And no matter how hard i try, theres always something that cruses my hopes. My dreams. My love.

The pain, the shame, the torture and all those lies....she liked him, and it kills me when they talk. It hurts deep down when she talks about him, all those days i spent crying, thinking, why no one gives a shit about my feelings, why no one givves 2 fucks about my emptyness. And it hurts me, every day. Yet no one cares to wonder why im feeling this way.
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Old 06-18-2007, 03:40 PM
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oh wow!!....this is niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiicccccccccccce!!!...i mean i can tottaly relate i know how u feel......its really good =]]
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this is just FANTASTIC!!! i like it a lot... i can relate to it too... just continue so, and u'll be like J.K. Rowling in the poetry world...
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Thnkx alot missy. :)
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thats so lovely<3
i love how anyone can relate to it, but at the same time they can't because everyone has a different way of deeling with pain and feeling it.
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Whoooaaaa!!!! This Is Gooood!!!!! Im Feelin This I Really Like It, Nice!
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