Uhm i wrote this like a couple of months ago when something weird happened in my life and well i've only just decided to post this up now cuz like i dont really feel how i felt when i was writing this which is good. anyways yh. and i KNOW that the 1st verse is kinda shitty but still...(Oh yh, this has NO title..and im not sure if i wrote this as a poem or a song..)

My Heart wont stop stinging
And i dunno what to say
Im hearing music and im singing
hoping this feeling will go away.

i cant take this any more
too much pressure on me
feeling like i cant walk out of that door
cuz im feelikg trapped, as trapped as i could be.

My mind is bursting with thoughts,
My heart is broken in two,
My body's physically sick,
but yet my soul is still searching for you.

I dunno what to do,
Why can't i be with you?
Why do i feel this way?
is it because im shes hurt too and she ain't ok?

I aint feeling like i should,
Because i love him but thats no good,
Cuz i dont want her to feel that way,
Saying how shes gonna forget him, Day by Day.

Girl what i feel for him aint wat i feel for you,
See i know i love him, thing is you love him too,
and suddenly, its hard to breathe, cuz i know ur hurt,
and you want him as your boo.

This feeling here inside is tearing me in two,
i wanna be with him and still be friends with you,
yet im torn and dunno what to say,
cuz i know you'll still like him at the end of the day..

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This is a poem, well at least to me it is. It's good.

Thnkx for your feedback. i might get back into doing poems again, im not sure.

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Nice poem Krys...
you should definitely get back into doing poems.

Thnkx for the Feeback too and yh, i just might.

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No problem.

do any of you have an idea as to how to improve it?

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yeah this ain't bad. :) u should keep writin.

thnkx pepper :)

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Hey Gurlie Luvv It I Mean It Sounded Lyke A Poem Ta` Me But Eitha Way Its Still Guud!!!!

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