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Old 12-12-2007, 09:20 PM
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Feels Like Home Aqain *Poem*

my mind has always been scattered, torn almost
the more he walked away the lonqer i wished for "one" day.
he was the only one my eyes ever saw; as for everyone else
it was a down fall. needles in my back filled to the brim with
poisen. somehow it numbed me up sumhow it took the pain away.
i hated my lief and sometimes thouqht the easy way out was a knife;
sumtimes life was no fun i looked to freedom for the gun.


torn tormented and tremendously abused; in sum ways i felt
fuqcked up &nd used. there was times were his hand was used
for anqer of course it stunq but knowin me i was used to the stinq.
i hid my smile from what i called the "world" of the lost souls.
everyone smiled for no reason wishing and hopinq for happiness.
but i...i knew the truth. deeper and deeper as time passed by; the minutes the
seconds and it only took one time it was too late i was carryinq around
another life.

There was niqhts when i sulked in my tears bathed in my blood;
and god willinq i'd stand another year. my eyes held even locked in
anqer but nevur did it make its way out. he was part of now. there
was no turning back. but now 2 years later her smile has brought me
back to life. my world is colored flower by flower tear with tear stem with leaf and
water with ocean. her touch brinqsz me closer to the finish line; the line i thouqht i'd nevur
see. shes my new lief now....my new world i loved her so much i started a new one....
and about to have two....









HEY GUYS HOPE YUU LIKED IT; HOPEFULLY YUU GET SUM HINTS IF NOT ILL
HELP YUU OUT. ITS OKAY BUT IMA RIGHT BETTER ONES BUT TELL ME
WAT YUU THINK!
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Old 12-13-2007, 06:38 AM
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Wow Girl that is awesom!

There was niqhts when i sulked in my tears bathed in my blood;
and god willinq i'd stand another year. my eyes held even locked in
anqer but nevur did it make its way out.
That is beautiful. I love u style. I well wanna hear more ........
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That was so great I could never write anyhtin like that
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Old 01-05-2008, 09:15 AM
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