Cancer

Denesha · #1 11-17-2007, 04:42 PM

With a lot of sadness i am telling you all that my uncle won't make Christmas!
Therefor I just wrote a poem titled Cancer.

Ur like poison
U have put ur claws already in everything
Scratching him away
Bit by bit
But with the speed of a fast train
A train that needs to stop very soon
To see how you making him feel is hurting me
Like knives are cutting me slowly into my heart
We all know when u are present
That tears will come soon
I know you’ll be gone by Christmas
But so will he
Just give us some more time
I beg you, Please

Miss Antonia · #2 11-17-2007, 04:57 PM

U can just feel the emotions from the poem, its beautiful.

I am truly sorry about your uncle :(

MissyA · #3 11-19-2007, 06:23 AM

so much expresion... i'm sooo sorry about your uncle... and about the way u feel because of that, cuz i have felt it too... my aunt died 3 weeks ago from cancer... i'm so sorry... the poem is very beautiful...

Kween Katz · #4 11-25-2007, 12:47 PM

One Of my boyfriends died from cancer and he meant the world to me..still dont feel the same without him so i know how u feel now and im really sorry.

Cancer is a b***h..

{|Mario|} · #5 11-27-2007, 12:50 PM

......that is so sad. Do you know what type of cancer it is? A lot of bad things been happening to you lately huh?

Denesha · #6 11-28-2007, 08:12 AM

he has 7 braintumors in total
and yea luck has not been on my side for the past ten months