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Old 10-26-2007, 05:26 AM
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Feelings..

Like an angel without its wings,
I'm falling without caution.
Don't even mind what i hit,
It's all over, no point of saving me..
I'm tired of picking up pieces of my heart.
No point in glueing them back, just to have them shattered again.
Neglect.
Dissapointment.
Abuse.
Just tired of it all..
My lifeless soul has had enough!
The boiling point has long past gone.
Explode...
Explode into a massive sea of tears.
I'm drowning,
No one can save me.
Suffocate...
Suffocate in pain,
Lifes pain.
Filling my lungs with the tears that i cried..
Drowning inside and no one cares.
Lifes map is upside down.
Wrong directions to the right places..
Wrong paths to the right situations..
I'm weakening..
Weakening rather than getting stonger.
Pain stabs at me, like little sharp needles
Slowly..
Slowly i'm erroding,
Slowly i'm falling,
No destination..
POW!
Face-First into reality.
I was never good enough for anyone..
Yet, I dry those tears once again,
Sweep up the pieces of my heart,
But can i ever erase the pain?
Once again, i'll swallow it all in for now..
Gotta keep my head high and just try again..
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Old 10-26-2007, 12:12 PM
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omfg

that is SO good

WOW

i can definately relate to it cuz i've felt like that before ...


awesome job with this
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Old 10-26-2007, 12:58 PM
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omfg

that is SO good

WOW

i can definately relate to it cuz i've felt like that before ...


awesome job with this
yeah, i totally agree... girl, seems like ur a mind-reader... way to go, gal!
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Old 10-27-2007, 03:38 AM
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Thanks you guys :)

my other poem is erm on here too, loool if u guys wanna read.
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